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Kpheeyat

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Well

There goes my good mood.

On a serious note, this was slightly unpolished all round but the rather controversial plot made up for it.
You got potential, just keep improving.

Good Sir

If only I had my voice acting equipment, I'd have that fat guy voice :(
Such an easy 4.4+ submission, damn, those seem to escape me :(
Oh well.
The flash is fairly well done and is super smooth, though the backgrounds are a bit weird, like a very varying attention to them ie some of them are super detialed and the rest is kind of sketchy.
The characters on the other hand are cute and hilarious. I think I'd scare everyone with a Naruto suit.
The ending is very abrubt but the post-ending is very cute so it compensates ^_^
The plot overall could be polished, as it's overall a bit random.
But NG loves random and it's halloween, so funk that.
Cheers and good luck on your next animations,
hope to get a role on some other flash of yours :P,
Kpheeyat ;)

Hello good sirs

As usual, it's a pleasure to see your brand of comedy ;)
Should you find yourself in need of an extra voice actor in any of your animations, I'd be happy to help out ;)

Now for some honest, hopefully constructive criticism:
- You could improve on the flash resolution. It's rather small for the file size
- The pacing is slower than in other episodes. Likely intentional to inspire a bit of fear. Perhaps I'm just a fearless beast but it didn't work for me.
- I was sensing some shocking conclusion, didn't really get to it for some reason, leaving me somewhat not sated.
- I'm glad you keep to your new characters, I hope they'll stay for a while longer;)
- This 5th point is here just to keep you company so that the total number of points is a nicer number. Say hello to point 5.

Cheers,
Paul ;)

Voice Actor...

Sounded creepily like morgan freeman.

Review

Short, music not yours so can't rate that.
So I'll review this upon its purpose.
What I believed you failed in was to make the characters look distinct like in the real one. What I mean by that is that they were all bright, had the same bodies(VERY thin, anorexic like, come on, their legs were STICKS), only slightly different faces, and you could only recognize them by their hair, eyes or/and accesories or/and behaviour. Their clothes blended in the brightness and I had to watch this 5 times to recognize everyone.
So improve on the variation of colours(esp the darker tones) and the body types next time and I think you'll have something there.

SodaKick responds:

I think if they weren't so dang thin the colors would be less of an issue. They're competing for a very small amount of space and stuff. So it's like, yeah I could toss in some details or colors, but it's so small that it blends in and muddles up the designs. But yes, valid complaints ultimately. Thanks for the feedback.

Hm hm hm :)

Not bad, terabiter person :D
Your(Tom's?) humor is spot on, making this a juicy shot of random humor.
However, it's mediocre on the graphics side. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but something you should improve on if you'd wish to to give the flash some more replay value or just make a longer flash in the future.
It'll all come with experience though, so I wish you luck ;)
Your friendly neighbourhood voice actor,
Kpheeyat.

I'm a voice actor. Also, I'm an NG user since 2004 and a VA since 2010:) - PM me or msn/e-mail me talent4people@gmail. com if you'd like to use my humble skills :) I welcome challenges.

Paul K @Kpheeyat

Age 33, Male

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Joined on 5/28/11

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