Well
There goes my good mood.
On a serious note, this was slightly unpolished all round but the rather controversial plot made up for it.
You got potential, just keep improving.
Well
There goes my good mood.
On a serious note, this was slightly unpolished all round but the rather controversial plot made up for it.
You got potential, just keep improving.
Good Sir
If only I had my voice acting equipment, I'd have that fat guy voice :(
Such an easy 4.4+ submission, damn, those seem to escape me :(
Oh well.
The flash is fairly well done and is super smooth, though the backgrounds are a bit weird, like a very varying attention to them ie some of them are super detialed and the rest is kind of sketchy.
The characters on the other hand are cute and hilarious. I think I'd scare everyone with a Naruto suit.
The ending is very abrubt but the post-ending is very cute so it compensates ^_^
The plot overall could be polished, as it's overall a bit random.
But NG loves random and it's halloween, so funk that.
Cheers and good luck on your next animations,
hope to get a role on some other flash of yours :P,
Kpheeyat ;)
Hello good sirs
As usual, it's a pleasure to see your brand of comedy ;)
Should you find yourself in need of an extra voice actor in any of your animations, I'd be happy to help out ;)
Now for some honest, hopefully constructive criticism:
- You could improve on the flash resolution. It's rather small for the file size
- The pacing is slower than in other episodes. Likely intentional to inspire a bit of fear. Perhaps I'm just a fearless beast but it didn't work for me.
- I was sensing some shocking conclusion, didn't really get to it for some reason, leaving me somewhat not sated.
- I'm glad you keep to your new characters, I hope they'll stay for a while longer;)
- This 5th point is here just to keep you company so that the total number of points is a nicer number. Say hello to point 5.
Cheers,
Paul ;)
Voice Actor...
Sounded creepily like morgan freeman.
I'm a voice actor. Also, I'm an NG user since 2004 and a VA since 2010:) - PM me or msn/e-mail me talent4people@gmail. com if you'd like to use my humble skills :) I welcome challenges.
Age 33, Male
Poland
Joined on 5/28/11